6月22日雅思写作思路解析（附7分范文）

　　6月22日的考试结束啦，我们来看一下这一次由雅思带路喵老师带来的写作范文解析~

 

　　06-22  利弊类 – 环保话题

 

　　More and more people buy and use their own car. Do you think advantages of this trend for individuals overweigh the disadvantages for environment?

 

　　题目大意：越来越多的人开私车。这种潮流对个人的好处和对环境的坏处哪个更大？

 

　　思路：

 

　　题目问的是利弊，可以用三种回答：1）利＞弊， 2）弊＞利  3）利弊相等

 

　　在利弊的PK时，要注意2点：1）对单个利弊的论证的合理性；2）两者比较的侧重，即在严重性方面能体现出一方＞另一方；

 

　　分析利弊时，尽量从多个角度阐述，多问问自己这个好处是否站得住脚，或这个坏处是否是不可解决的；让论证更严密；

 

　　关键词

 

　　advantages of this trend for individuals: 对好处有明确限定——针对个人

 

　　disadvantages for environment：对坏处也有明确限定——针对环境

 

　　提纲梳理如下：

 

6月22日雅思写作思路解析（附7分范文）

 

　　范文

 

　　It has been a popular trend that a growing number of people tend to buy their own cars. While its benefits to individuals are beyond doubt, I would say that detrimental effects of the driving trend on environment are far outweighing.

 

　　From an individual perspective, the trend of life-on-wheels can be seen as positive for both comfortable and convenient reasons. Firstly, it is not difficult to imagine the comfort of driving to work in comparison with the feeling of being sandwiched in the packed subway during rush hours. Also, for some travelers who need to commute between cities frequently, driving by themselves is sometimes a relatively more affordable and convenient alternative to air flights, which is more expensive and irritating when considering the cumbersome security procedures at airports, if not the common place delay.

 

　　However, these superficial benefits mentioned above are not justified enough to offset its damage to the environment. Out of all the problems,the carbon dioxide commissions stand out as the most serious symptom of the problem to which I see the prevailing driving lifestyle as the answer. Another apprehension we cannot afford to ignore is potential exhaustion of fuel energy with the rising number of cars. Some might argue that both problems could be mitigated by the electronic car, which are reckoned as a cleaner and energy saving alternative to its traditional counterparts in the near future.Nevertheless, this might lead to a new problem: how to deal with the discarded old models? Given the fact that most of their materials and engines arenon-biodegradable, they might stay in the junk yard for decades.

 

　　In conclusion, although the benefits of private cars cannot be denied, I would say these merits for individuals should be at the sacrificeof environment.

 

　　相关词汇：

 

　　Detrimental  有害的

 

　　Sandwich  被夹在中间

 

　　Commute  往返穿梭

 

　　Irritating  恼人的

 

　　Cumbersome  繁琐的

 

　　Superficial  表面的

 

　　Symptom  病症

 

　　Prevailing  泛滥的

 

　　Apprehension  担忧

 

　　Mitigate  减少

 

　　Non-biodegradable  无法降解的

 

　　Sacrifice  牺牲

　　相关句型：

 

　　While its benefits arebeyond doubt, I would say that detrimental effects are far outweighing.

 

　　… can be seen as positive for both comfortable andconvenient reasons.

 

　　… are not justified enough to offset its damage to … .

 

　　… stand out as the most serious symptom of the problem towhich I see … as the answer