由于语言习惯不同，中国考生在写作文时时常会出现一些病句，今天就要教你如何修改写作中的病句，希望对大家的复习有所帮助。
1. The artist’s work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
改进：Artists’ work upgrades our civilization.
2. For example, you work in a big factory.
改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
3. You’ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
改进：You’ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
6. Their brain is still very young.
改进: They are still immature.
7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
8. They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
